代词。主格与宾格。指代不明。文中出现的多个代词不一致。
判断方法:代词是用来指代的。看到代词马上回头寻找其指代对象。
To become a world figure-skating champion like Kristi Yamaguchi, one must be so dedicated that you will practice six hours a day. No error.
这句话的问题在于代词使用不一致。请看one must be so dedicated that you will practice six hours a day,前面用的代词是one,但是后文使用的是you,再理解句意,不难发现两个代词其实是在指代同一个人。所以应该把you改成one.
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代词。主格与宾格。指代不明。文中出现的多个代词不一致。
判断方法:代词是用来指代的。看到代词马上回头寻找其指代对象。
To become a world figure-skating champion like Kristi Yamaguchi, one must be so dedicated that you will practice six hours a day. No error.
这句话的问题在于代词使用不一致。请看one must be so dedicated that you will practice six hours a day,前面用的代词是one,但是后文使用的是you,再理解句意,不难发现两个代词其实是在指代同一个人。所以应该把you改成one.