比如，小作文的题目原文是“The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.”
5分的改写：The graph shows some similarities between the birth rates of China and USA from 1920 to 2000.
6分的改写：The graph provided reveals some surprising similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000.
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比如，小作文的题目原文是“The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.”
5分的改写：The graph shows some similarities between the birth rates of China and USA from 1920 to 2000.
6分的改写：The graph provided reveals some surprising similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000.